You said we'd be together,
Forever.
You lied,
I cried.
You said "I love you."
If you only knew,
Of the pain I went through.
My heart now lies flat,
Like a welcome mat.
Broken down,
Making me look like a clown.
I hate you,
Hope you knew.
A contest entry
- break my ♥ again, bby. by juliex-exotic shine.
350 points, ended August 19, 2007, 17 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
I was having writers block, but I hope you like it anyway!
Comments
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The first four lines were short, but they summed up so much. I know how you feel. The same thing happened to me. Good write, and best of luck in the contest.

