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Together? Thought Not!

You said we'd be together,
Forever.

You lied,
I cried.

You said "I love you."
If you only knew,
Of the pain I went through.

My heart now lies flat,
Like a welcome mat.

Broken down,
Making me look like a clown.

I hate you,
Hope you knew.

A contest entry

I was having writers block, but I hope you like it anyway!

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  • WriteOrWrong597
    August 14, 2007

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    The first four lines were short, but they summed up so much. I know how you feel. The same thing happened to me. Good write, and best of luck in the contest.