man!
they dressed me in flowing scarlet robes
denying everything I could eschew
leaving me in a state of mass insurrection
beyond any hope of redemption
out in the cold
man!
they cut right to the chase
didn't they?
I was incarcerated
extrapolated
and left brooding for another spell to cast
of liquidity and smoky remnants
that use to wreath me in their vapors
jesus!
and still they wanted more
I think not!
not this little black duck
fuck 'em
you can kiss my punxsutawney ass
praise the lord and pass the goddamned ammunition
it's party time
so break out the bells and whistles
I'm gonna blow for a while...
A contest entry
- BLASPHEMY!!!! by Cinnarry.
1750 points, ended August 30, 2007, 17 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Comments
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Barty very puzzled here what kind of animal is a punxsutawney ass? Barty has heard of hunglika donkey and obstinatazza billy goat. Barty also confused about the little black duck. But overall interesting to Barty so clappy-happy to you!!
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LOLOLOLOL! Damn this is gonna be hard to judge!
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Ahh wonderful! I love this and think you have caught the feelings of the contest holder well!
Excellent write and all the best
Gaylene
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