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His little girl

He watches over me
Never forgetting his little girl
Raising her like his own

She left on her own will

Heart broken he let her spread her wings

For to keep her locked up

Would only fuel the fire within

 

Still watching closely

Always there for her

His angel

 

 

 

 

 

Author notes

To my step-father. He was the only person I caould really trust when I lived in wisconsin.

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  • PhoenixFaith
    August 14, 2007

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    Really nicely done. When I saw the title i didn't know that it would be written this way. But don't get me wrong this is wonderfully written. I love the 2nd stanza the best. Great job with this keep it up. And good luck in the contest.

    Never give up
    Kate


  • Stardust-luvr
    August 13, 2007

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    well written and so well spoken from your soul. I can feel the tears as you wrote this - May you have the peace in your heart and that you keep in touch with him. As they say something like - if you love something set it free let it spread its wings and fly; if it doesnt come back it never was yours to begin with in your heart (sorry i dont know the actual quote)but my blessing to you both and good luck xxx