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Echoes of the Rain

 

 

My breath becomes shallow

 I surrender to you

feeling helpless

there I stand with my nipples

at attention

like rippened grapes

ready to be picked and eaten

I'm obliged by your eagerness

to taste the juiciness of my fruit

 I take you...

to your comfort zone 

of my wild fires

like a newborn

I nurse you

giving more strength

to fulfill my every need

baring the armour

of being on your knees

breathe

and inhale

the aromas

of my

cotoure'

the joyful sounds

eclipsed memories

that are carved

into the stones of your mind

like a bow and arrow

aiming for the heart

you are insane

from the pleasurable pain

of wanting me more

I tease you

only to pounce

you more....and more

like a Lion attacking her Prey

that's how you like it

but

I want you quiet now

marinate

in this moment

shhhh...

don't talk

grind and

listen to the Beautiful sounds

Echoes...of the Rain

 

 

 

Author notes

Got a lil freakiness in me tonight...yall

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  • Loveandblessings2u gold member
    March 11, 2008

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    Sis this is so beautiful,
    full of passion.
    You sure know how to pull your readers in,
    and give them a treat to last a life time.
    Wonderful writing.
    Very enjoyable.
    Good luck in the contest.

    Loveandblessings2u & yours always
    Joyce


    • Ephiphany
      March 11, 2008
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      Ooops

      forgot about this one sis I was being nicety here Thanks for the comment, good luck with your entries. Really cool contest.

      E


  • Polaja Greeters member
    March 7, 2008

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    I think that where you have 'abliged' it should be 'obliged' but apart from that this is a wonderful poem... I like the way it is written and presented... I like the honest passion that shines through your words - none of this sounds forced at all beautiful

    Keep writing

    Polly

    • Ephiphany
      March 7, 2008
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      Yes thank you Polly

      I corrected that typo I appreciate it.


  • Marctheman
    August 14, 2007

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    i have to ask you, are you thinking of puting all these on a book form or something, because the passion you have for writting sensual poems like that need to share with more people...
    i don't have to say it you know it...


    • Ephiphany
      August 14, 2007
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      Honestly,....some of my

      family on here has really been pushing me too...never thought of it, I was just enjoying being able to express myself....but I am truly happy that you like my poetry. Its an honor to have such wonderful people read what I think....although some thoughts are naughty, but what the Hay...we all grown Thanks again, e


  • HaleyMary
    August 14, 2007

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    Beautiful write. Very passionate. the part of the rain at the end gave the poem a sensual feel. Keep up the great work.

    • Ephiphany
      August 14, 2007
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      Thank you, Arzab, I always appreciate your comments.
      E


  • Poetic Tasha Moderators member
    August 14, 2007

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    LOL just tonight?

    This was wonderful piff
    i only think that t he first line should be "my breath" not breathe

    as always i love your steamy writes absolutely gorgeous

    Tasha
    xo


    • Ephiphany
      August 14, 2007
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      Thank you sis....

      I thought I had fixed that...and yes Im freaky only tonight you a mess, you know me so well already...shhh, don't think anybody else does though

      lil Miss Innocent
      Love ya
      Piffy


  • theredcatjazzoflove gold member
    August 13, 2007

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    beautiful very deep expressive and deep with lemon lime twist bitter passion i liked it i just read your author notes what am i going to do with you? nice lyrics


    • Ephiphany
      August 14, 2007
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      Thank you lil sister

      what are yall gonna do with me, huh? Love me
      Just kidding, Im just feeling my way around...I appreciate your comments, you are part of my Muse to want to continue my drive and Passion to write.

      Much luv,
      Piffy

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