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Alive

Jumping heart first in this river,
the murky, muddy waters
drowning every saddened memory.
-Im free-
Laughter climbs my body
and butterflies
fill my tummy
-Im vibrant-
The air is hot,
sweat rolling down my back.
The waters cold,
spreading chills across body.
And
-Im alive-

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  • mysticlabyrinth
    August 17, 2007

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    stacey this makes me smile ear to ear. i love it. and i have a lot to tell you about my trip to costa rica. see you at church sunday.

  • withoutlove13
    August 14, 2007
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    amazing! i have always loved your peotry im so glad youre writing again


  • Quetzalcoatl
    August 14, 2007
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    wow- great write stac... made me wanna go swim at zoar, lol. really though, this was awesome