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Sharpies and T-Shirts

Sharpies scratch my back
My friends leaving messages--

"I own this shirt"
"Your face"
"I love potatoes"

Fragments of a lost era
To be uncovered someday
By an unlikely explorer
Searching through my dresser

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Trying my hand at free verse. What do you think?

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  • Danneh
    August 13, 2007

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    You did good, especially if it's not something your used to writing in..

    Ah, how I love those shirts we defile as kids and teenagers.. =) We're insane.. Though it's usually my jeans. not Shirts.. Dunno why.. Not normal I suppose.

    Good job though

    -Danneh<3


    • BeautifullyxTragic
      August 13, 2007
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      Thanks! I tried to do jeans, but I've never had anyone sign my jeans so it was difficult.