you've become but a shadow,
lost in my dreams.
i needed forgivness,
wanted to come clean.
and now that you're gone,
i miss you the most.
let shadows be shadows,
and dreams be but ghosts.
all alone in this room,
with no friends but these thoughts,
you thought i had loved you,
i thought you forgot.
but now you are back,
and its making me think,
but i have nothing left,
just this paper and ink.
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A contest entry
- Lost Lovers by PassionateWriter09.
400 points, ended August 14, 2007, 12 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Emotional Poems Wanted by DeadlyTurnip.
440 points, ended August 22, 2007, 43 entries
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470 points, ended August 22, 2007, 14 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Giving Up On That Thing Called Love by xxRainbowDawnxx.
300 points, ended October 2, 2007, 13 entries
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I loved the first stanza... Loved the way I could put myself in the perspective and also liked the rhyme. Old love, what a hurt hey? Just when you think you're getting over it they come bursting back into your life. Ahh, the pain.
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"and its making me think," - "its" would be "it's".
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Holy Sh... Hi!
I absolutely love, love, LOVE this. Thank you so much for entering my contest.
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So reach into creation's heart
to find you joy as morning's brainchild
rising from her night of nurture
to find in light a new expression
thanks for you entry
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The title really brings this poem together. This is really more thinking than emotion, but what's the difference? Thank you for entering!
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