Fear,
This emotion,
Blocks us from true knowledge,
Imagine planes of far off worlds,
Future civilizations,
Worshiping unknown idols,
Flying from place to place,
Our unconcous holds many secrets,
We all humanity,
Fear this so we turn from it,
To unlock this box,
Would open the darkest dreams,
Unknown terrors,
A deeper knowledge,
Of oneself that we hide,
The true insanity of it,
Is not realizing all we are,
This is not for the faint of heart,
Only for thoughs capable,
Of dealing with the horrers,
Inside the locked box of our minds.
Author notes
Thank you Sigmund Freud for showing us the fear of the unconcous.
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Comments
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Another great write...Absolutely love this piece...Wonderful!
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wow..
a great great poem..
using sigmund froyds insanity to scare us..
haha im joking, he was a smart man, just a little bit creepy honestly.
always at an extreme,
extremes are possible but doenst necessarily mean somebody would come to the extreme if given a good* opportunity.
=]
some humans are animals some humans arent...
or atleast thats how i see it.
much love,
hassan
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Even before reading the authors note I got the whole Freud feeling. Gotta love AP Euro. ^_- Well, think this was pretty good. The flow was a bit off, but the words held alot of emotion. I really liked the Sci-Fi touch you added. Well good luck and good write.
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