Then go and break my heart
Into a million and one pieces
You have no idea how bad you hurt me
How bad I need you in my life
You lied to me and said we'd be together forever
But forevers just a word isn't it
I'll never forget you or the sweet things
You told me that broke my heart
You were my everything, we were meant to be
Supossed to be, but we lost it
I just don't get it
We were a match made in heaven
Or so I thought
We've shared so much
Now I'll never get to feel your warm embrace
Or the touch of your sweet lips
I think about you all the time
I try to forget about you but it's so hard
Hard not to break down and cry
When I realize that you want her and not me
When I realize that we'll never have what we used to
I'll never forget you, and maybe one day
you'll realize that we were meant for each other.
I MISS YOU
Author notes
I think the poem pretty much sum's it' self up.
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That was a very beautiful storyline and the language was amazing. The flow was pretty good. Well done. Thank you. Good luck.
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ahh, thanks (:
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wow very very good, i know excatly how u feel cuz im feeling the same way right now. everyone keeps tellin me ill get over it n b fine but they just dont understand my feelings i have for him. it hurts soo bad, i think about him all the time i cry all the time, nothin is in my head but him, n yes i try to forget but it doesn't work. i hope things get better for you thou!
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thanks, im glad u liked it, and yea things are better =) we got back together
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Wow to bad you couldn't have enterd your own contest.
This is a sad but beautiful poem.
Deep and emotinal You did so well on this.
How often in life we have loved and lost, how often in life we have hurt so deep.
Wonderful job on this.
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mm, sorry hun. I know how it feels. Tho I guess it's different for everybody. Good emotional write. Keep writing from within.
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Thanks =) glad u liked it!
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I feel the same way.
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