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Earth's Present

The Earth is a living thing.
Right now, when she's so perfect
(when the light falls just so,
when the trees, flowers, and brook conspire
to create such glory and joy)
I feel at peace.

The Earth is a living thing,
She grows and changes constantly,
like a girl in the ripeness of life.
And this is her present to me.

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  • Whispering Wind Moderators member
    August 13, 2007

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    The earth is a living thing, she grows and changes constantly~ This is such a joy to read, it feels so pleasant...Thank you so much for sharing your beautiful heart with me


  • Entwining Beauty
    August 13, 2007

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    beautifully penned poem this is so true the earth is a living thing it's very enthralling good luck and thank you