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I give to you

I give to you my life
I give to you my soul
I am happy to be your wife
With you my life is no longer dole

When you wake I'll be right there by your side
My mind is in a bind
Because of you I have so much pride
I cant get you off my mind

No one could mean as much as you do to me
No one can replace the happiness you bring to me
Why cant you see
How much you mean to me

I give to you my heart
I give to you my world
My heart never wants to be apart
My world you have twirled

I give to you my love
I give to you my dreams
You are my heaven above
We are the perfect team....

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  • Engra
    August 19, 2007

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    awwww so very sweet and meaningfull, show them how you feel.
    "i give youmy love, dreams
    you are my heaven above
    we are the perfect team"
    i love this stanza so much. your an insperation
    LOVE ENGRA


    • Crystal Ellens
      August 20, 2007
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      Engra, Thank you so much for your comment.I am glad you enjoyed it I try to say how I feel in my work. I highly appreciate your comment

  • DisasterousLetdown
    August 15, 2007
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    This is a really sweet poem, I like it

    • Crystal Ellens
      August 16, 2007
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      Disasterousletdown, thank you for your comment it is highly appreciated