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goodbye my friend

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umm i want to write a poem for my friend who is leaving for college and this is the first thing i wrote... im sure i will have more drafts to come

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  • tLaL
    April 16, 2008
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    I love that poem. i have it on my facebook and my myspace.

    <3


  • phantomwriter
    September 5, 2007
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    Le Sigh. I've read this one several times. Perfect for graduation/leaving etc. I miss you!


  • Sandygram
    August 15, 2007

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    This was such a wonderful poem. It is hard when our friends move away, even if only for a while. If the friendship is strong and you both work at keeping in touch it may last a lifetime. Dear true friends are worth holding onto. This was a wonderful poem and such a pleasure to read. I can relate as I miss friends too. You take care, Sandy


  • Biciaksr
    August 15, 2007

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    gorgeous

    a simply beautiful poem that obviously came from your heart flowing out naturally and with purity...just remember that strong friendships like this one can sustain it all - even college =)