I went flying through the forest
But I bashed into a tree
So I kicked it
...And broke my foot
I punched it over and over
I was mad
The tree didn't care
It squirted stuff in my eye
Fuck you tree
I hate you
Author notes
ok, i know this is strange. but the prompt was to write crappy poetry, but with actual poetic forms and theories in it. it had to be real poetry, but crappy.
In a list
A contest entry
- SHIT HAPPENS! (HAGU HOY!) by dehydrated.
900 points, ended August 15, 2007, 14 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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The ending was definitly the best part. It was so abrubt and wonderful, and terribly funny. My intellect says this is nonsense but I'm afraid I enjoyed this enormously. Thanks for that
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this is sooo amazing.,.. this poem made me laugh for a very long time...im going to give you points this is soo good.
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lol! well thankies for the points
I just wrote it down cause I was totally bored, and I think it's gotten more reviews than anything else I've written... I'm not sure if I should be happy about that or not... lol
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wow... so inspirational
just kidding. what sucky experience and poem.
Congrats!
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this is great
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