“Some days…“ she dreams of angels
Though she’s nothing like the things
But, I don’t think she wants to be one
She only wants their wings.
She longs “To fly” with passion
Above the woman who knows doubt
She wants to soar in her lover’s arms
While she learns what life’s about.
She stumbled thru some hard times
Prayed by “Candlelight”
Till as life moved on she noticed
The stars that fill the night.
In a “Constellation”
she found a love that’s rare
And when she pens her words to him
they flow with flash and flare.
No longer is she “Incomplete”
She knows who she took “The path” for;
a “Sigh within” a “Beautiful moment”
and he holds her “Forevermore.”
Patricia Gibson-Little
September 11, 2003
Author notes
The titles to some of Mystysaint’s poems are scattered throughout mine. You will find them in “quotes.” Her beautiful words are worth reading. I hope I have captured a little of her spirit.
Patti
Written September 12th, 2003
In a list
A contest entry
- A Poet......Tell me about him/her.. by Celticmoon.
250 points, ended September 21, 2003, 20 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Excellent
This was very beautiful and a very fitting tribute to the authoress that it was designed for.
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I'm glad that everyone enjoyed my tribute to such a gifted writer.
Thank you,
Patti -
Patti, I was a step ahead of the Author's Comments. I love poems that have a very creative side to them as well as the words they use. My dear, you did that with this write. And may I add well written at that. Good luck in the contest.......Jim aka ThePoetAmuse
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I think this is absolutely stunning. Wonderful job, suzi is such a sweet soul, with a beautiful spirit, you have done well here..
~ becky
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Yep, like the others said you captured her. This is a beautiful poem. Shes an amazing lass. Good luck in the contest
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Now I know I myself must seek out the writes that you have mentioned within your piece and read them for myself.This was a very beautiful tribute to mysty and her work.You did an amzing job with this piece.
Well Done!
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You did capture her
really beautiful and the poems you mentioned are awsome
good luck in your challenge!!! -
indeed you did AngelSeeker
a lovely piece you have created.
CM -
she's a beautiful woman, thanks for writing this.
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yeaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaah warm fuzzy poems
I love FLUFF
Long live FLUFF
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This was a sweet, sweet tribute to a wonderful and full of life poet.
Yvonne
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This is really very beautiful..thank you Good luck in the contest... I was surprised to find this .. :) Thank you.
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You have great tallent
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This is a really pretty and inspiring poem. It seems as if now, she now longer has to wish for wings for now, she is able to fly,
beautiful and touching poem. You've done well with this contest.
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