i love you so much, although Iam not there
But look inside your heart, our memmories we will share
I may have gone to heaven but I will be watching over you
I will be there in your hard time, or when you are feeling blue
When ever you need to talk, or need comfort in any way
I will be closer by,for you to talk to any day
When you feel upset ,or need someone to listen
look above at the stars and it will be me glistening
Remember as you grow up i wont be far away
I will be there as your guardian angel, protect you in every way
When you feel a kiss but no body seems to be there
it is just me letting you know i care
I love with all my heart, And this I will forever
For we will meet again one day, and will always be togeather....
A contest entry
- RIP My Brother (Contest) by Child of an Angel.
475 points, ended August 20, 2007, 13 entries
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Comments
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Wonderful job with the rhyme and the flow, also you did good on keeping the tough rules I had for this one. I really liked it and great job, Just a bit of help, read it out loud and fix maybe a missing word here or there, or the small typos you mig ht have, since it will be printed. Thank you for entering!!
Always
Emily
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