Crimson Flame rose above horizon
cascade calming, silver stars illusion
candle flickering created illumination
casting aura, swirling purple left confusion
Calming water, winds delicate conduction
carefree blew silk to the face determination
Cradling in arms sun as she settle horizon
Author notes
The endless horizon of my candied dementia
A contest entry
- PIF Quickie Contest 10/30/25 by penman.
525 points, ended August 13, 2007, 6 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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Wonderful
Very well done. Best of luck in the contest.
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Thankyou so much for this award this is the first pif i have won it means so much to me this poem I just want to thank you From inner of my soul thank you
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You're very welcome. It was a great poem and very deserving of the award. Congratulations.
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Thank you I love contest on nature
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