A crisp cool invigorating breeze
filled with romantic memories.
Days seem shorter while
trees shed their dress of red,
yellow, orange, and green.
Reminiscence of football games,
school days and Halloween.
This change of season can only
be given to us as a gift
from a God who exemplifies
his love for us
through Autumn.
Author notes
published in 1998
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You described the poem very good.The first sentence made me want to read more and more.You should think about writing about all of the other seasons too!
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I love the fall, it's one of my favorite seasons. You have very vividly described it, and done a wonderful job doing it. Great write. I love the way you wrote this.
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There's no doubt in my mind, after reading this poem, that you love autumn. I, myself, wish that summer would never end -- but that is nature, I guess. I can tell that your love of autumn is based upon some wonderful memories. Perhaps you met someone special during this time, or perhaps you're just a big fan of football. In any sense, thank you for sharing this.
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A crisp cool invigorating breeze
filled with romantic memories.
Days seem shorter while
trees shed their dress of red,
yellow, orange, and green.
Reminiscence of football games,
school days and Halloween.
This change of season can only
be given to us as a gift
from a God who exemplifies
his love for us,
through Autumn.
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