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Raisins?

 

greener greed of grape in vine

dimmer diner dares define,

in brighter breath bouquet sublime

exotic excellence of taste refined,

sparkled rainbow chaste divine

 

better use, as glass of wine

 

 

Author notes

raisins are candied grapes...awww, i hate raisins with unequaled dimentia

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  • Desire gold member
    August 16, 2007

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    Wow!!

    -chewing some raisins-
    Holy Shindig
    You no likey raisins
    I said the same thing till I tried the green ones~
    Boy did they bring forth a smile~

    yet I don't have a taste for wine

    Love this one!
    Congratulations on Your Trophy win
    Best wishes to You
    Many blessings too
    and much love~ Desire~*~


  • penman gold member
    August 13, 2007
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    Wonderful

    Very well done. Best of luck in the contest.


  • omega13
    August 13, 2007

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    Is a raisin nothing more than the shriveled remains of what was once the fruit of passion and love? It seems you've done some pretty awesome writing today.