Infinite dreamer,
Strong-willed, insane,
Midnight in the city
Dancing in the rain
Pounding the piano keys
Fusing with the chords
Trapped inside a memory
Praying to the Lord
Blasting the beat of a thousand songs
Ignoring the complaints
Laughing maniacally with friends
Creating murals with spray paint
Mesmerized by the crimson moon
Intrigued by the dancing flames
Breathing in black roses
Caught up in the game
Begging for a pet raccoon
Speeding off with hair-dye
Hastily downing three red bulls
Sprouting wings to fly
Drifting through the clouds
Dreaming of a world united
Protective, understanding,
Independent, open-minded.
~Rain
5/8/07
Author notes
This is for option...2 i think?
I'm not sure if you wanted a fresh write or what. I had to do this for school, so it is a bit...tame...but nonetheless it's about me. Anywayz, I hope it's adequate.
.x.
Peace
.x.
A contest entry
- Portals to the soul by AngelEyes13.
300 points, ended March 3, 2008, 15 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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Great write. Absolutly wonderful. Thank you soo much for entering my contest.
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On this site it becomes so depressing when the word "awesome" is used for the most dreadful crap - I call it the "LOVEY-DOVEY SYNDROME" - but here is a piece of writing that defies even that description. So, so impressive for anyone and particularly for a 16 year old. Don't stop writing.
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AWESOME!!!
Woooaah this is sooo freakin awesome!!!, i loove the rhymeing it was great!, i looved the imagery, and i loved the words you chose!, it was really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really gooooooooooooooooooooood!!!!!...pleease keep writing!!! -
Nicely done, had a nice flow and uplifting feel to it. Thanks for sharing and good luck in the Challenge.
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This was pretty good...
I wasnt sure if I was going to allow those under 18 to enter the challenge but now I am glad that I did.
I was very impressed with your writing.
Keep up the good work.
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Im suprised
im suprised at your ability at such a young age to weave together pieces such these.and although they seem teenagerish (and thats acceptable becuase, well, your a teenager)they still show poetic ability that is not so common.keep writting.and I loved that requeum one, I enjoyed reading that. -
a poem tame or full of heat,
your personility shines through.
Telling others about oneself is hard
I still have trouble.
Riftkin -
great poem.
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lovely, very well written. you sound like a fun, random person. i love how you wrapped up the end, im not nearly so good, alot of my poetry seems to just drop into nowhere.
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OMFG Morgan. I loved this. I liked the red bull part. I sure know how much you are in love with those things. lol. Yeah i love it.
Drifting through the clouds
Dreaming of a world united
Protective, understanding,
Independent, open-minded. - that is my fav stanza. It is awsome. Very good write with a smooth even flow. Nicely penned dirty pretty.
Love MJ
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