Life;
Full of choices
Some simple some complex
Like what food to buy
While out shopping
Or complicated like
Who you will marry
Yet choices we must make
So what will you choose in life?
Author notes
I'm not sure if this is what you wanted but...
In a list
A contest entry
- PIF Quickie Contest 10/30/25 by penman.
525 points, ended August 13, 2007, 6 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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Hm, short and to the point.
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A very good over view on life's choices
We all must grasp the power of choice and protect
what rights a choice carries with it.
Great Poem, Keep it up -Kevin
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thanks glad you enjoyed it.
Steve
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Choices!!...
you make it sound so simple! good write here, if only my life were as easy!!. Well worth the trophies! WASP.
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hmmm i'l choose to run around like a half crazed gurl in love with chocolate and rock music ... sound any good? lol just joshin with u.... nice poem. simple short and straight to the point. me likes!
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interesting choice
glad you liked the poem
-Steve-
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lets see
first choice admit that u r a great writter second not to kill u
anyways love the poem
keep it up
and tell Oreo i love her
don't be sad
i love u too
love
your friend
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thanks
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no problem
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Your poems don't rhyme.
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whats your point? poetry doesn't have to rhyme...
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It does if it wants to be good, lol.
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aww, this is cute. i liked it alot..... its so tru... great write
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thanks Kaitlyn!
-Steve-
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Wonderful
Very well done. Best of luck in the contest.
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thank you!
-Steve-
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awh this was quite cute,lol.pretty good!
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thank you!
-Steve-
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