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We are the Soul

the beauty of this life
is lost on carnal essence
which are filled with grief
and laden with acquiescence

in the depths of each of us
the reality of who we are
causes the soul to confess
such wonder from afar

the body will decay
it’s the vessel we are contained in
our fears we must allay
our future now begins

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  • PrabhuDayal Khattar gold member
    August 16, 2007

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    our fears we must allay
    our future now begins



    I can see the notes of the intriguing steps..Indeed it is a wonderful poem touching the gist of
    the prompt very well..thanks for the beautiful entry in my contest..