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Angels among us

Hello my children, which path shall you choose?

I've taught you what respect was, and pay your dues.

I felt that was important at such a young age

so you can hold your head up crossing life's stage.

You might think I am gone, but I'm really close by

it was Gods gift to me when my children sigh.

Keep our memories strong and things that we done

for my memories too, will be second to none.

Each and everyone of you have a small part of me

and it shines a little more everyday, as you will see.

Shari your the oldest and can understand more

of what Gods plans are and what he has in store.

Your brothers and sisters are your family now

and I will try to guide you someway, ...somehow.

Lil' Craig my son you taught me a thing or two

my oldest boy, know I will miss fishin with you.

Chyla little one, if you need me just call

I'm still right beside you, since you learned to crawl.

Connar another treasure carried in dads heart

one of dads little angels and work of art.

Erika my precious, since the day that you came

I knew then, my life would never be the same.

When you all are a little older, sis will tell about me

and how "Each and everyone of you"                  

                    still holds this hearts...

                                                                    K

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                                                                                   y

 

I love you Children!

                               Your dad

 

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  • Dalaney gold member
    August 13, 2007
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    This is beautiful.

    Love, Lane


  • moon2u
    August 13, 2007
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    BEAUTIFUL

    YOU CONTINUE TO TUG AT MY HEART STRINGS WITH YOUR POETRY. THIS IS A LOVELY SENTIMENTAL TRIBUTE FOR YOUR GRAND CHILDREN. ALMOST SEEMS PENNED FROM THEIR FATHER.
    AND YES WE ARE ALL BROTHERS AND SISTERS...WE ARE ALL LEAVES OF ONE BRANCH, DROPS OF ONE OCEAN, FLOWERS OF ONE GARDEN.


  • Whispering Wind Moderators member
    August 13, 2007

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    Your words do touch this heart of mine and a tear looses it's place  the ink flows from the masters pen and hearts slowly mend...Thank you so much my brother for sharing your beautiful heart


  • Lost-Rose-Petal
    August 13, 2007

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    wow such a beautiful meaningful dedication. Comes from the heart and that is what poetry is all about. Awesome write. Keep up the wonderful work
    MINDIE


  • tawk gold member
    August 13, 2007

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    Ohhhh this is such a wonderful write for his children. You have done a splendid job. So full of love and heart. I know they loved it. Just amazing God bless you for doing this


  • Jalalbad gold member
    August 13, 2007
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    what a wonderful beautiful tribute to your children

    you are so blessed to have them.
    Smile,
    Judy


    • getsbetter
      August 13, 2007
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      Hi jalollybad, I wrote this for some children that lost their dad on july 4th. and The sister asked us to write something that would sound like its coming from there dad. Me, a dad myself- put myself there in this poem. But thank you for your so kind words...GETS


  • Child of an Angel
    August 13, 2007
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    Sheesh, I am so glad I reopened this contest, because I have gotten the best entries as of today. Wonderful job on the personal touch, and this has yet again made me smile and feel it deep within. Wonderful Job here. Thank you for taking the time to enter. I am so happy with this entry!!! Keep the pen flowing and Good Luck!!

    Always
    Emily

    • getsbetter
      August 13, 2007
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      You are welcome my sweet friend. And I am so very sorry about your brother. May God hold him close to his heart sweetness...GETS

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