Secrets and turmoil festers inside,
The pain and the anguish she trys to hide.
Forcefull confinment within her own mind,
Trying so hard she falls off the line.
Low self worth and disbelief,
He can't believe someone would care.
Trauma and pain in the past,
More to come, it's just not fair.
Tears of blood stream,
Her way to finnaly scream.
To escape this carousel of horror,
She's chilled to the core.
Little white lines of relief,
To try to forget this disease.
He knows he's falling fast,
But just wants the pain to pass.
I'm on the outside looking in,
I undestand but can't help.
I let them know I'm there if they'll have me,
I'd save them, if only.
Author notes
This is about my ex and how I wanted to save her and my boyfriend now...it's real complicated.
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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I have to admit Tasha this was one mighty deep poem you have written here and it is sad to rea din its own eay but it is very beautifully done as wlel. your rhyming is superb and well I can sorta understand what this is about. well I do hope things tuen out for the better and not the worst like my life is.
take care and keep on writing 
Sincerely, Paul
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Really awesome job on this, the rhyming is great and the emotion just flows out of it. I understand what it's like to want to save your friends, but your burdened with you own problems that you can't even fix...and you have to watch them suffer...it hurts a lot. I hope that all turns out well for yourself and your friends. Keep your head up and believe.
xxKaela
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This is a really good write and it's so sad. I know way too well what it's like to see people you care about hurt themselves. It really hurts to not be able to save them from themselves. I hope everything gets better sweetie.
xx
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