I give you the middle finger,
Not calling you number one,
But rather more hate,
Then love.
You look at me with a smile,
It's not I'm sorry but rather fuck off.
I don't need you in my life,
Not after all you did.
Look at my middle fingers,
Yeah I don't got one but two,
And they are both for you.
Fuck you for all you did to me,
Fuck you for saying you loved me,
Fuck you for everything.
I give you the middle finger,
The one that is the longest,
Of all the rest,
The one that is well the best,
To say how I really feel for you.
It is a little harsh I know that,
But well I am still not taking it back,
The middle fingers well just say fuck you.
Fuck you for all you did to me,
Fuck you for saying you loved me,
Fuck you for everything.
I give the middle finger,
To let you know that I am done,
Through with all your shit,
That you seem to like to give,
Well here is my gift for you,
Not one middle finger,
But two.
Fuck you for all you did to me,
Fuck you for saying you loved me,
Fuck you for everything.
A contest entry
- My teenage Angst by LeaPan.
375 points, ended August 31, 2007, 11 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - The Magical Word of F*ck :) by ultimate beluga.
450 points, ended November 14, 2007, 14 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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your swearing seemed particularly methodical and ordered, but this is cool, lotsa angst! i liked the repeated parts, gave it a lyric/song feel. thanks heaps for entering!
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What a great entry in the contest
best of luck to you
Delila
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wow.
>.< i really dont like all that much cussing but this was pretty good -
Wow I can really feel your angry in this one. Great writing you have done here.
Well here is my gift for you,
Not one middle finger,
But two.
These lines here are awesome. Thanks for the read and keep on writing
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wow sheila...deep...good job
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