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Empty Pallet {Your neck}

So smooth and tempting
Soft and supple

Look to the skies
A midnight shooting star

A blank pallet
Ready for my contribution

Subdued paint beating
Submerged it flows

A dwindling glimpse
Your neck

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Heh, random thoughts, tell me what you think and how you interpret this piece

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Comments

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  • badfish7769
    June 14
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    nice

  • Rejected Easter Egg gold member
    May 6
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    will lie and say it's about me

  • SugarCandyKittyKat
    April 13
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    I find it subtle,but romantic...

  • Naridill gold member
    September 11, 2007

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    Very random, but still holds together well with the flow and interpretation. Nicely penned.


  • woodstock 69
    August 13, 2007

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    *blinks*

    Wow, that was short simple and cool Nice write...i liked it..


  • Danneh
    August 13, 2007

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    Vampiric.. I like it, though you could have been a bit darker with the background... Might of been 'prettier' on the outside, almost as pretty as it is in real.. You did a good job.. Especially for it just to be random thoughts.

    -Danneh<3
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