lying here covered starry blanket of silken thread
conducting wind gracefully uplifts my dull soul
shooting stars beam, blaze across the skies
bare arms lift towards the sun, breeze kisses
calming water cools heated veins feed my mind
aromatic lifts in clouds dusk, shimmering silver
reflecting shadows walk the emerald threads.
A contest entry
- Ok, time to be picky! by Wrozes Thorne.
300 points, ended August 19, 2007, 12 entries
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300 points, ended August 17, 2007, 9 entries
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Yet another great write. amazing entry. Good luck
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thankyou so much this has brightened up my day
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I really liked this poem. It was wonderfully descriptive. I really liked the line:
"conducting wind gracefully uplifts my dull soul"
I always feel like that when I'm caught in the wind. I always feel so uplifted and free.
Why didn't I love the poem? Sometimes/all of the time I can be a stickler for grammer and it was just one really long run on sentence T_T.
Good job!!
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Wow, this is awesome! I love the use of nature. The only issue I had, it goes from night to day and back and forth. But it's beautiful! Thank you for entering my contest!
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Thank you I am so glad you enjoyed it thanks for commenting
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This is truly magnificent! A wonderful take on this prompt...enjoyed this so much...best of luck in this contest...smiles, Terry
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Mesmerizing! how beautiful indeed! enchanting details! muc luck to you!
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thank you
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Simply beautiful. This write is so full of imagery and emotion. I wish you the best in the contest
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don't we all wish we could get away to somwhere beautiful this is my insight to were i would love to escape to my dream so thank you for the beauiful comment
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