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A World of Pain

Alone, again, in this void

Where everything is still

Silence the foundation

Darkness the matter

 

Reality is flipped over its head

Up is down, left is right

Monsters are loved

Beauty is despised

 

All is remote and unimportant

All suffers or dies

Problems persist to exist

Here, anyone can do wrong

 

I walk in this void

Shadows like dark clouds

Make up my path

Ever changing the direction

 

There is no time here

All goes on and on

No beginning or end

Just excruciating emptiness

 

Things that were lost

Arrive in the void

Floating about like stars

Until they are found

 

Emotions are extinct

Everything dead and bare

No one is talking

No one is caring

 

My breath is cold

I feel the air run through my lungs

Filling my body with freeze

My limbs are numb from it

 

It's as though my life

Is being sucked from my body

My soul, my spirit, ripped away

Leaving only a carcass

 

This pulling hurts my eyes

A ball of pressure lays there

Gnawing at my nerves and will

Making all things disappear

Except the pain

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  • Kindredblood
    August 13, 2007

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    pain a feeling I know so well, though mine isnt emotional so much as it is reality, something I am stuck with living with forever, or till I die.
    Your words had a profound impact on me, for various reason, they rang with an impact on history and past, each of us walks a road with choices not all good, not all bad, but still reality can hold us in such an emotional grasp, like bars that close around suffercating, and cold, to deal with such is and will always be the hardest test in our lives, your words flow with such deep emotions writing about life is never easy wether real or not, I see and feel the pain you write off, yet can not know what you are going through, for I am not you, if this is about you all I can hope is that you find a way through, and find your place in life to live it as only you know how, with a will and the strength your words show here, powerfully written.