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Queen bee selfishness

Your the queen bee of the school,
You say what goes,
Your court up in boys,

Your the popular one,

You dis everyone,

You think your perfect,

You think your every boys dream,

Well guess what hun,

You the queen bee wanna be.

For there aint no queen bee.

Author notes

This is a poem about all those girls that think there the queen bee of school but everyones different so there aint no queen bee.

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  • Hells-rider
    August 14, 2007
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    well done

    not bad for your first attempt


  • bunnyboo1993
    August 14, 2007
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    thankz for the feed back.


  • Just Paper
    August 13, 2007
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    "You're" instead of "your".
    I don't really think this works with the contest.


  • bunnyboo1993
    August 13, 2007
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    thankz


  • Ipanickedatthedisco
    August 13, 2007
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    That's good! I like the idea of "well there's no queen bee"
    ♥

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