Listen to me for just one minute please
I have been patience with you and not said a word
but you have kept me silent for way to long
now its time for you and I to have a talk
Will you tell me please what is my crime
I have been imprison for such a long time
you're afraid that your friendships will fail
you don't believe in happy endings or fairy tails
because of things that happen in your past
your afraid so you hide behind a mask
Now don't be scared of my fragile state
I promise to you that I won't fully brake
I know that to trust again will be real hard
but if we each do our part we could slowly start
For loving again will heal the parts
that have been broken or torn apart
it will get easier with time you will see
now please let me out and set me free
Author notes
"My Duty Is To My Heart"
My heart has been broken way too many times,this is truly straigh from my heart....
Please tell me what you think
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maggy, I am so impressed with this! It reads aloud beautifully and cries out pain and resolve.
A terrific poem.
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amazing
this poem is beautiful......thank you for sharing
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oh wow this is beautiful
I feel a sense of urgency and longing as I read this
excellent write
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I love this. I can really relate to it and it reminds me of what my mother is going through with my step dad.
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Wonderful
Love the strong feelings in this. Maybe this time your
heart will listen.
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Now don't be scared of my fragile state
I promise to you that I won't fully brake
I know that to trust again will be real hard
but if we each do our part we could slowly start
Please let me out so I can love again
with time you will forget about the pain
this is great! love the rhyme scheme however there is too much here you have said everything and leaves nothing for the imagination for the future try to be abstract and mysterious but a great open write go you -
Beautiful.
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