I speak fluent poetry
with words born in the soul,
And birthed through lips
not polished
nor laced by self control.
My words aren’t meant for writers
to judge them with their own
but they speak soft
to spirits
in passion’s lifting tone.
So feel my spirit drifting near
in verses bathed with cries.
Meant for inspiration
to weary souls
with weary eyes.
Take my words for what they are
And not what they could be.
I give each line it’s power
from the strength
that dwells in me.
I’ll always find my comfort
in a pencils scratchy stroke
And never will regret tear back
a single verse
I wrote.
Author notes
I chose options three, a poem about what writing means to me.
I haven't been able to pull this piece out for a while. Thanks.
In a list
A contest entry
- Pre-writes by Laura Lamarca.
650 points, ended October 3, 2007, 5 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Pre-Write Challenge by Nicolette Everett.
450 points, ended November 25, 2007, 71 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Make this THE largest Contest EVER on AP [enter, enter, enter!] by Symphony.
18000 points, ended April 28, 1011 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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Very inspirational write, there were two sections of this that caught my eye, which are most definitely my favourite part of the poem;
My words aren’t meant for writers
to judge them with their own" <-- because I agree entirely. I'm always wary of critiquing poems that are very personal to people because while I might be aware that there's room for improvement, I always think also that what a writer writes is THEM and if I critique it / make suggestions, it's no longer just hteir own - it's a confusing topic for me
And, then that closing line, very powerful;
"And never will regret tear back
a single verse
I wrote"
You summed up what it is to be a poet, a writer, here - so serenely, and beautifully!" Thank you for entering
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Aye eureka! Two golds?? one's good enough! I can see how you got those golds. Amazing!!
I'm touched by your write. I can so relate to how I write poems. Though not as good as yours.
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Wonderful write, well deserved the gold
Thank you for sharing
Blessings
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congrats on the well deserved gold. The rhyme and flow were great, the sentiment was great and the border is delicious. The overall presentation is wonderful. great job on this and thank you for entering.
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Oh this is simply superb and I suppose the gold you have earned for this speaks for itself!
I love the last stanza so much but have a hard time picking from all of the perfectly crafted verses. You really nailed it. Share your poetry, ask for help, but in the end it is a creative entity not to be torn or disdained by others but absorbed by those who need it!
Excellent piece!
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this is wonderful. The rhyme and flow are outstanding and that border is lovely. I like the title to the end. No critique here except I wish it were mine
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This is grand, simple, but just awesome.
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this is simply astounding. the rhyme and flow are great
congrats on the gold, i can see why you won them
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First of all, I would like to congratulate you on your wins. Second most, I would like to say, I see how you won the gold (both times). This poem is truly unique, the whole idea just screams, "Awesome!" The rhythm and rhyme are so very natural, that your mind just unknowingly slips into a pattern while reading it. I love:
I speak fluent poetry
with words born in the soul,
And birthed through lips
not polished
nor laced by self control.
The stanza, no, scratch that, the whole poem, says and means so much, but for each individual their own. Thank you for sharing this write. Also, do you mind if I put the first stanza on my page? I would give you, and poem, full credit, of course.
♥
Ariel
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I really enjoyed the flow, rythm, and rhyme scheme of this poem. It felt very natural as I read along.
One spelling error.
"judge them with THEIR own." -
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Thank you so much for catching that. 22 reviews and not a single one noticed
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Wow. One the background/picture is amazing, I really love it. I also like how you wrote about poetry in a poem form, that was really good and really nice. The flow was good and the words went with each other.
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Ok, right now I can't see who you are because I havent judged the contest. I was wondering before I forget to ask, if I could borrow your background? I really love it.
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You absolutely may borrow any of my backgrounds. Thank you so much for the trophy. I was shocked and pleased. Thank you.
Much love
Carrie
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This totally blew me away from the start and I wish to congratulate you on your Gold...this truly is a well deserved award, thank you for this gem of a write in my contest. Hope you have a pleasant evening. La x
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Thanks for the comment and the trophy I hope you evening is a very pleasant one for you as well
Much Love
Carrie
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congrats on your gold, seems we are in one together again! lol
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I like this...so it stays! Thank you for entering and good luck! La x
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Shoot, i really like how this flows, as i read it i could feel my mind slip into the pattern you meant for it to be in. Awesome
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Lovely, you said it all with this piece, I am so glad you agree, and you know, I really wish I could give everyone that entered this contest points, but tis life. I just want you to know that this has nothing to do with the individual poem, it is all to do with times. BRAVO and thank you for entering, and standing by me, KP
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A poem to be proud of. It just rolls along beautifully. I love it, well done.
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A wonderful poem you have penned here.Filled with such passion for perfection.I love the rhythm and rhyme in this piece Splendid indeed
Tony
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Great write! I think this stanza says it all ...
"Take my words for what they are
And not what they could be.
I give each line it’s power
from the strength
that dwells in me."
We all have words that are valuable. Expression should be encouraged, not discouraged. Thank you for sharing this one. Good luck in the contest. ....JustBreathe
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i'm just a little confused.....help me
the poem says it is not written to be judged yet points were paid so it would be jusged. i DO understand how a poem really has to please only the poet. Pardon me while I jusge the poem. I like the rhyme and the meter and how it doesn't seem to be forced. It read well and wasn't over my head. That's why i like it.
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I was never saying it shouldn't be judged. I was saying it should not be compared to any other works. It can be put out there so I can see how others feel about it. The points were paid so I could share my work with others who feel the same way. The words are not meant to be broken down or discussed. They are just to be seen and appreciated. Thank for the comment and most certanly thank you for the applause
Much Love
Carrie
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This is really good,
and exactly why artists should write, not to for points, or critiques,
but from the strength that comes from their thoughts, and the impact it does to the reader.
great job and i wish you the best luck in this contest.
drunk.
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I like this...I think anyone that does art is an artist whether by a critic's standards if it's good is their own opinion...but you have to realize that a person never had to pick up a pencil and write or pick up an instrument and play...so it's art...
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