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Victim ?

Its funny you should call me lovely and sweet,
Did you not take any notice of the corner where we did meet?
Did you think Innocence would be alone late at night? 
I have sold my body to more then one kind.

I hopped in your car and felt sweet relief,
The glint of your blade; at last it was my time to sleep.
No more bodies pushing their way in my soul,
The devil had come to take me on home.

The excitement was mine when I followed your stride,
Up the stairs into the bedroom you cunningly guide.
The beat in my veins whispered thankyou,
When my clothes hit the floor I murmured one and two.

By three I felt the knifes passage deep in my spine,
I wanted to dance and laugh all at the same time.
Didn’t you notice the nicks on your hand?
I guess the madman thought he had a desirable plan.

But as you chop me up I just want you to know,
I was one of the best; that corners biggest ho.
So remember when the night sweats keep you from sleep,
This flirts blood was a poisonous deadly beast. 


Author notes

I read serial killer by Lord dracon and I was so caught up in it I had to see it from the girls side....and twist it up a little ....Thankyou so much Lord dracon for allowing me to do this.

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  • Uniquely-Scarred
    August 13, 2007

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    fuck yeah this complements LD piece so well this was a great write, combine it into one you guys please its a winner beileve me loved this side of the story lots


  • Lord Dracon
    August 13, 2007
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    This is awesome! I love how you totally made it follow, Like it is one big storyline. I love it!

  • Miss Malliciouse
    August 13, 2007
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    well what ever inspired you...the poem was fantastic...loved it brilliant work well done


    • Forbidden Tempest
      August 13, 2007
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      Thankyou for the great comment, I hope you go or have read Lord Dracon's serial killer that is the backbone of this.

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