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Cum With Me

Your body was spectacular, So smooth and tanned
Made me feel so good, so lucky to be a man
With your eyes of blue, and your hair so blonde
You made me yours, with one wave of your wand
In front of me you stood, legs slightly parted
A warm sesation in my loins, you definately started
Breasts so beautiful, the erect nipples made me think
They looked like little puppy dogs, wanting a drink
I could see your pussy, had been recently shaved
And for so long, for it, I had genuinely craved
It was turning me on, seeing all of your pink bits
My cock was so hard, I was going out of my wits
The scent of your juices was driving me insane
My balls were aching so much, I was in fucking pain
I was thinking to myself, please pick up the pace
But you just slammed your hot pussy, right in my face
The taste of your beaver was lovely and sweet
I could tell right away, you were surely on heat
With my fingers, I opened your cunt wide
Slipped my longing tongue, so deep inside
The juices that were flowing, were like a clear paste
I was enjoying eating you, I was enjoying the taste
I pulled my tongue out, and started tickling your clit 
Only very briefly, then I started sucking on it
I was sucking your clitty, it was nice and erect
Such a sweet tasting pussy, i did never expect
You then grabbed my head, pulled me into your pink chasm
You went right off, you were having a multiple orgasm
Soon as I finished, you threw me back on the couch
Started sucking my hard cock, before i could say "ouch"
Fuck, you were good at this, twas one thing I did note
How in the hell, did you get all that dick, in your throat?
Watching you sucking, was making me grin
My aching balls were banging, on your chin
All of a sudden, I trembled and my legs went like jelly
Hot cum shot from my balls, and down into your belly 
You swallowed it all, you never complained or spoke
All I could wonder, is how come you didn`t choke 
Slowly my penis was slipped, out of your mouth
He was eager for a journey, that was further south
You got on top, and I entered your tunnel of love
And I stared in awe, at your perfect tits up above
Looking at them there, was too much to stand
I took one in my mouth, and the other in hand
You were riding me hard now, you were fucking me fast
My cock going in deep, my balls, banging on your arse
My cock was so hard , the nob was swollen and blue
I was ready to cum, and I knew you were too
We cum together, you crying out "God" and me screaming "yes"
Then it was over, we were so fucked, and oh, what a mess
When I awoke, I had to clean up that cum and cream
Stupid fucking cunt, me, it was only a wet dream 

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  • Ho74pp1eP1e
    September 2, 2008

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    It's good, but I do not like it when someone puts the same work into a million contest....it just takes away from the charm that is was written for my contest and even in mind for me the reader. Thank you.


  • Still single
    July 13, 2008
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    nice effort, and a sexy one with a good twist. thanks for entering.


  • scribbleheart
    May 12, 2008
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    very good. very erotic, and then funny at the end..awesome


  • MaMa-2-be-Cindy
    January 4, 2008
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    OMG OMG OMG OMG

    WOW, im like dripping right now ahahahahahahaha

    Brilliant, just keep getting hotter and hotter. and clever ending I never would have expected it

    I see I have read this before, but damn the second time around it had my attention a hell of a lot more

    Such a great piece of erotic writing here
    Thank you and Good Luck


    Cindy


  • parntsoftwins
    November 11, 2007

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    VERY good I enjoyed it very much. The whole poem had me engulfed then the end you threw in a smile. Well done.


    • goat1826
      November 11, 2007
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      I am so glad you liked the poem
      Thanks for the gold


  • Lost-Rose-Petal
    November 8, 2007

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    hahaha i loved it!!!
    Really had me going in the begining all the way through...was thinking i might need a cold shower after reading it lol.
    The ending...was amazing..so perfect.
    Thanks soooo much for entering!
    L-R-P


  • Tarja
    October 11, 2007

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    Congrats on the three other trophies this was very sexy and well written thank you so much for entering and good luck


  • MaMa-2-be-Cindy
    October 11, 2007

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    Really good effort with the ryhming and flow. Enjoyable, a humourous and sexy read. Thank you and Good Luck


  • Mykeee
    October 10, 2007
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    This is great Erotica but it has too many of the resticted words i had in my rules. Very hot but


  • ckwriter69
    October 9, 2007

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    Yeah, that's what were looking for. Very hot and sexy, sorry it was just a wet dream. Good erotic images and descriptions, passed my woody test. Thanks for entering and good luck in the contest.


  • Poetic Sunshine gold member
    October 8, 2007

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    Hot! Hot! Hot!

    This was Hot! I did notice some spelling and grammar errors and the rhymes were off a bit, But wow, This made me wet! Very nicely done. Thank you for entering and good luck.

    Sunshine

    • goat1826
      October 8, 2007
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      I think you will find no spelling mistaskes, thats the way wqe spell in Australia, lol.
      Thanks for your kind remarks


  • Aurielle
    September 23, 2007

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    lol...the ending made this funny. Never heard a poem writen about a wet dream. I guess this is what happens to guys when they get their wet dreams...this was sexy...I like that line with "I pulled my tongue...The effort and creativity was splendid


  • Lucky-Charm
    September 12, 2007

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    Dang,this was another hott piece! I had a good idea on holding an erotica contest.Your great at this stuff.Thanks and goodluck.


  • Lucky-Charm
    September 12, 2007
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    Place your name in the author box so I can comment on another one of your poems.


    • goat1826
      September 12, 2007
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      Sorry

      My real name is Stan Billing and my AP name is goat1826


  • Narcissus In Chains silver member
    September 3, 2007
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    No! No! No! This does not fit the picture at all! Amtic DQ. Plus, You need to seperate your poem into stanzas. It makes it much easier read, and honestly, I think you should come up with better words than cock and Pussy. And, actually, it is supposed to be spelt come, not cum.


  • bootz
    August 28, 2007
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    Hugh Aint got shit!! LOL

    holy shit folks. I should delete my piece. I cant even match anyones in this contest. I guess I dont use enough wording. Wow, maybe ppl should suggest me to expand my word usage. Yours was hott!! Ur right about "Im Nutz", you really are. LOL

    scott

    the provacative word was the best part


  • neon nightmares
    August 20, 2007
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    Then it was over, we were so fucked, and oh, what a mess
    When I awoke, I had to clean up that cum and cream
    Stupid fucking cunt, me, it was only a wet dream

    LOL, this really made me laugh.
    Shame cause it sounds like it would have been great sex.
    Anyway, thanks for entering and good luck
    hugs
    xx


  • Riftkin gold member
    August 18, 2007
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    nooooo say it isn't soooo

    damn made me want to find a man

    honey this was sweet


  • adsaige
    August 14, 2007

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    Oooh...

    This is what intense and urgent "porn" erotic is...this need that builds up within us...unfortunately...it may be you know...not real, not...I'm trying to find the words.

    I'm not really sure if you seduced me...we'll just have to se. You're on the finalist for now...but (unless you're a gold member) I need you to review my rules please. If you are a gold member, then please send me a message and let me know.


  • Ray Von
    August 13, 2007

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    The rhyming looks VERY forced, by that i mea:
    Breasts so beautiful, the erect nipples made me think
    They looked like little puppy dogs, wanting a drink???
    I'm finding it VERY hard to find an erotic poem that's actually erotic.. This is NOT erotic at all, this is like porn on paper! and your desperate tries to make it look poetic are pathetic!
    by that I mean
    The taste of your beaver was lovely and sweet

  • hurtgurl
    August 13, 2007
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    sweetie I am so excited I have to go and take a shower again. nice work


  • elemental angel
    August 13, 2007

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    And a delious dream it sounds too, great vivid imagery. Thank you so much for entering and good luck in my contest.
    Bravo


  • Zorro69
    August 13, 2007

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    Very amusing. The last line sums it up I think - it's nice to have a bit of accurate self-assessment now and then.


  • Da-Lyricologist
    August 13, 2007
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    wow i am going have to shower after reading this poem it is very discriptive and vivid

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