A new born son
Time to say goodbye
Making everyone cry
Tonks and Lupin the perfect couple
God I'm gonna miss them
The brave man and women
This is my ode to Lupin and Tonks
Goodbye forever
forgotten? never!
Goodbye Tonks and Lupin
Author notes
I was so sad when Tonks and Lupin died when they had just had their son *sob sob*
In a list
A contest entry
- Harry Potter and the Deathly Hallows!! *SPOILERS* by NooNiThEWitcH.
385 points, ended November 28, 2007, 24 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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After my mum told me they died I decided not to read it... still have it... I'm not good with good characters dying in books...
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oh...that is so sad, and you are right to. I can't believe that they will never get to watch their son grow up...obviously I got really attached....I am good now though.
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Love It!
I know most people hate Repeat commenters, but i felt the SAME way when i read the book.
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great words great expression
i like this alot
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i LOVE THIS POEM! I felt the same way when I read the book.
Its sad, man
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a cute scribe, but the background is IMPOSSIBLE...
the background makes me want to scream... if you need, I'll make you something better... but I had to highlight just to read the poem
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aww i love harry potter, good write x
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I once slept with someone called Potter. Pansy Potter.
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lololololol
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not very deep but effective
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I'm not really a Harry Potter fan...but I do know who Lupin is. Tonks...not so sure. I did feel your sadness in this poem...and I also felt your love for their charactes. JK really has a devoted fan in you.
Kudos. -
I cried at the part where they died. I literally cried.
Too many children lost parents to the war, and Teddy barely even knew his. It's a tragedy.
Beyond that, the poem was good. -
Lol, I am assuming this is a Harry Potter thing? (I'm quick like that). Is he related to Beatrix?
I've never really seen any of the movies but I'm sure this is a fitting tribute! (Just so you know tho, they didn't really die!)
Thanks for reading my poem, take care.
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Aww..
I'm into Harry Potter, though I only read to the second book; I didn't read anymore (until now). When is the sixth movie coming out, anyway? Anywho, good job!
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I just finished reading the book this past weekend and was sorry to see these two character go. They were strong and powerful. Thanks for sharing and good luck in the contest.
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i really like this, i know when i read that they died it like slapped me in the face. nice job.
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aw this was really sweet :] just a suggestion on the line
'Me forget them never'
It's not really correct English. Perhaps just put 'I'll forget them; never!' or even
"Goodbye forever,
Forgotten? Never!"
Otherwise, this is a very nice little poem -
I love it, I thought it was really sad when they died, great tribute
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This is very sweet and awesome!
Nice addition of the background and the picture!
Nice flow and rhyme.
I think you meant "woman" here: "The brave man and women"
and may I suggest something in the last line:
"Me forget them never" it could be "Forget them, I will never!"
Thank you so much for entering this in my contest. Keep on writing and good luck. Feel free to enter again!
Nooni
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oh my gosh. very lovely poem. excellent tribute to Tonks and Lupin!
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Good write. A nice tribute to them
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This is really good I love it!!!! Truthfully it could have been a little longer and all but it was still a great poem!
Koodles
~*~ Mystic
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