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Virgin (Cinquain round)

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Virgin
brought forth a son
foretold by the prophets
though never touched by a man she
conceived

 

 

conceived
by God's power
when she was found pregnant
no one else believed her except
Joseph

 

 

Joseph
believed the Lord
married her anyway
for in her womb she carried man's
Savior

 

 

Savior
the sinless one
the Son of the most high
He came forth to be born of a
virgin

 

 

 

 

Author notes

My six syllable word:

parthenogenesis: noun
1. human conception without fertilization by a man

The form is cinquain. Unrhymed 2,4,6,8,2 syllables

In this case I chained the versed together and returned to the starting word

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  • Tamera
    August 27, 2007

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    I like the word, the poem, and the background. I love the subject of the write. A very tender piece, and I would love read it in a softer form.


  • Stickboy gold member
    August 13, 2007

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    awwwwwwwwwwwwwwww I love this daddy, you did in fact tell this story so beautifully! Good luck in this contest, I love you daddy


  • Sandygram
    August 13, 2007

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    You have captured the birth of Christ so beautifully. Lovely imagery. So nice to read this morning. So nice when people believe in each other and don't judge one another. Great cinquain chain. Take care, Many Blessings. Sandy


    • Spiritual Poet gold member
      August 13, 2007
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      awww

      Thanks, you should take on this contest yourself. It was a challenge!