adjust rabbit ears
tinfoil decor subdues snow,
prayer never hurts
Author notes
Drat that horizontal hold!!! Just when they were about to kiss!
A contest entry
- The Black-And-White TV Haiku Contest by NoWayJo.
600 points, ended August 22, 2007, 19 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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Very very good!
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If you understand, you've dated yourself
Just as I have! Thanks Swan.
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The good, old days.....
You have dated yourself with this write! ha ha! Never fear, your secret is safe with me. Wonderful write, it perfectly captures the image of messing around with the TV in hopes of getting decent reception. The title is perfect for this, I wonder how many will get the reference? I enjoyed the background you chose. Well done! You brought back a few, frustrating memories! Thanks for sharing your vision.
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TY, Cthulhu! Must've missed your clappy hands back when
I think we're both dated
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lol This was SO short but yet just as sweet. It was beautiful. Nice job, I liked this one a lot
Congratulations on your Honorable Mention, you sure deserved it!
~Pandy
(P.S... that contest ended on my birthday!)
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What an cute-cute image for a haiku-theme of those rabbit-ears! You had me smiling all the way through reading this entry, Deb. Just adorable through-and-through!
Jo
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Danke dudette!!!
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Brilliant!
Some great entires into this contest! I love how your peice adapts the traditional 'nature' aspect of the haiku, and relates it to television.
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LOL
yep...always when you dont want to miss the good part...this is cute as much nostalgic tv...great entry nitch love it!
Mal
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Thank You
Appreciate it Mally, even looking at this background gives me memories of missing 'the good part'
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