Beyond the wall, is a secret garden full of love
It was built, to last for eternity, by God above
A place sweetheart, where there is no way of leaving
All our lives of this place, we two have been dreaming
Twas never built for couples, who to each other aren`t true
It is only open sweetheart to honest lovers, like me and you
We can stay there together dear, till the end of time
You giving me your heart, and I`ll be giving you mine
The sun does shine there a hundred percent of the time
The water is crystal clear and the flowers are sublime
All we can do there is simply relax, swim or play
If you would rather, we can make sweet love all day
Paula we could have stayed where we were and rotted away
Or we can go on loving each other forever, what do you say?
Coz each day that I know you, my love grows a bit more
It`s not in my imagination, of that I`m definately sure
Something bought us together and I`m sure that its fate
I know we are in that garden, we walked through the gate
If forever is eternity, then for eternity I want to be
In this lovers garden with my sweetheart, Paula Maree
Millions of people have no idea what they are missing
On this side of the gate is so much loving and kissing
Sometimes it seems like an Angel has cast a spell
Such a wondrous place, a great place to dwell
Through this gate I walked, and along I bought you
This place is simply beautiful and you are to me too
Garden may be a fantasy, but I will never say "never"
One thing is for certain though I will love you forever
If my sweetheart, one day that garden we do see
Would you find it in your heart to enter with me?
I would hold you so gently and give you a big kiss
We would spend forever and ever in absolute bliss
Author notes
Option 2 in Tarja`s contest
In a list
A contest entry
- Gardens Gate ( Picture Inspired ) by Poetryintheblood.
350 points, ended August 18, 2007, 10 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Are You Good Enough To write Something Really Beautiful ? by Princess Perdue.
900 points, ended August 30, 2007, 12 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - For Once by katie-jo.
450 points, ended September 6, 2007, 9 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Your Secret Garden. by Poetryintheblood.
550 points, ended January 8, 12 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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Thank you for your most beautiful entry, good luck in my contest, Josie
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This was fantastic... it wasn't really what I was looking for from this option but I thought it was so well done! Thank you for entering! It had great structure and well just over all well written. Thanks again! And good luck.
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very lovely.
thank you so much for sharing.
thank you for sharing and good luck in the contest. -
How simply divine is this! ...A very beautiful and spiritual piece of work and so well written. The imagery is wonderful and left me feeling calm while pondering over your beautiful woven work. This contest is going to be so hard to judge. Thank you for entering your lovely work into my contest and good luck.
Shaz xx
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Thank you for your beautiful entry, Josephine
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