I look out to the broken land
Full of red dust and rock and dirty sand
Without water or plant in sight
Hot in the day and dry cold in the night
One of the many barren plains
In this wide red land that sees no real rains
But all the folk here will tell ya
I am, You are, We are Australia
In a list
A contest entry
- Time is wasted when no rain is tasted. by badddgirl.
450 points, ended August 16, 2007, 20 entries
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Brilliant!
I absolutely love this poem, great job, and your very funny!
But all the folk here will tell ya
I am, You are, We are Australia -
Some of the lines could have done with out some extra words, but all in all I liked this. The last two lines were brilliant.
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Vute poem..loved it!
All the best!
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Being an Aussie, I love this, well done,
Josephine
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good description of Australia, very clear.
Just a warning weren't you meant to put "badddgirl" in your author comments? I thought the instructions said you were meant to put HER name in there not your name? -
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haha thanks, yeah youre right, doh. maybe i can't read after all
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