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everything means. something

clearly to me and to you this will be, is
on this kiss we linger, hold
notice how these words fall exceedingly short
could it be we delve deeper than before
use of measurement, nothing exists but this
bearing witness to this pinnacle, you and
i. us.
nothing to say, just this kiss we breathe
earthen treasures fading, we of the stars


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  • TillyMay
    August 28, 2007
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    There are those moments when words are not needed- those brilliant precious moments when time pauses and the world becomes a dream and the dream becomes our world... What a beautiful, succinct and wise poem. We may not be here, in our bodies, forever... but those dreams and those moments live on-
    Your poetry will live on as well. Nicely done.
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