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Change Me

Silent night-startled by the telephone
House is quiet-you're desperate and alone.
Years wasted, bitter regret
Your fear-it's not over yet.
Left alone to chase your demons
Terrified winter will be the only season.
If only you could change me
There wouldn't be this melancholy.
Me listening, charged, guilty, I'm sorry.
Fit in my new wardrobe-submissive
Misinterpreted as angst, aren't you brilliantly dismissive.
Sighs and pauses, well anyway
I just called to say
I'm thinking of you
Can't we start over, fresh and new?
How sad, it should inspire
Passions to burn and the soul set afire.
Some replacement for passive waiting
alternative for eyeing walls, pensively contemplating.
If only I could change me
listening, guilty, with hushed I'm sorry.
Past is past-it's time for change.
Unarmed, my brave face left on the firing range.
Memories-banshees screaming and rushed
with your heel my heart was crushed.
But you didn't mean it; I'm your baby
If only we could change me.

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  • revsoup
    August 13, 2007

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    BE YOU

    change for nothing,mate or no one.no matter how much the person you care about so deeply,wants you too.even if your demons have the best of you. you can always still say ... you are you


  • AliceinPoetryLand gold member
    August 13, 2007

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    Welcome to Allpoetry

    Oh this is really sad, simply for the fact that you want to change yourself to please another person People should accept you as you are. Once they change you, then you aren't YOU anymore.
    The feelings of anguish certainly came through in this, but feelings of wanting to change yourself to please another rather than please yourself.
    Thanks so much for sharing and all the best to you

    If you need any help here at AP please don't hesitate to contact myself or any other online Greeter. We are always willing to help
    Gaylene