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Ruination

Blood.
Smeared.
On white shorts.
Ruined.

Wrist.
Severed.
Vision turning black.
Dead.

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  • juggalettebingy
    August 23, 2007
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    good job..

    short.. to the point.. and your imagination can run wild with it.. loved it.. ty


  • elfdragongnome
    August 13, 2007

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    OMG DON'T DIEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE e