As I type this,
I am crying.
As I type this,
I am Lying.
As I sing this,
My voice cracks.
As I sing this,
I place the bones upon the racks.
As I read this,
I laugh at myself.
As I read this,
I tear down my shelves.
As I remember this,
I yank my hair.
As I remember this,
I rip my room bare.
As I speak.
As I learn.
As I calm.
As I see.
My mind let's loose.
I tumble to the ground.
I envy and want.
But fall without a sound.
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this is brilliant and well written, good layout and structure. I love the repeatition here, it all adds effect and it's very powerful. I've been sat at my desk and writtining and had these things and thoughts happen to me, so its good that I'm can relate to your write. brilliantly written, well done! X
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It is too well written! Gragh! -stabs you with an eraser- O.o Seriously, good job Kathy! I loves you and your poems!
~KORI~
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