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the world stopped spinning

walking in the darkness
i reach for his hand
and he pull away
something was wrong

i had something on my mind
these words that i needed to say
he said lets count to three
and let our words run free

"tell me whats on your mind
and i'll tell you whats on mine"
no one wanted to confess
and we were running out of time

the words that came from his lips
echoed in my head
he wanted to break up
and be bestfriends instead

i could face him
tears were streaming down my face
i didn't know what to do
so i walked away.

"i can't be your bestfriend"
he was so confused
"damn it andrew!"
"I'm falling in love with you"

the night he broke my heart
the world stopped spinning

Author notes

this was seriously my last night.

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