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My Last, My Everything

Walked up to him,
Looked in his eyes.

Blue as a Texas sky.
I said,

"Don't lie"

I love you my dear.
Please don't lie.

You don't have to fear.
Mommy's here.

Your my son,
My last, My everything.

No matter what,
I love you.

"Don't lie"

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  • Thomas20
    September 7, 2007
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    A very loving and caring Mother, you write some really good poems, enjoyed reading!


  • Yemassee gold member
    September 5, 2007

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    A wise mom. And maybe the only one who can tell him that and he'll listen. Mom's are great, well, at least mine is. I like the title, it works both ways, for him and her.