I face the melee
Trowel in hand,
flip-flop shod
Charge in
Delicacy of a ballerina,
Knowledge of a philosopher
Instinct of an artist
I transform
Protected by low stone wall
Bathed in summer's golden hue
The scenic gardener
A contest entry
- Peace -- you either have it or you don't PIF by tomisb.
525 points, ended August 16, 2007, 12 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
First impressions, critique!
Comments
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I'm very sorry but we must remove this poem from the contest because it doesn't rhyme and the aim of the contest is for rhying poets...sorry....Sue
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ooops...
sorry. I entered a prewrite or two and forgot they were free verse... o.O Please excuse my blondish behavior since I am also hosting a contest... =]
Best of all with the judging.
Lysander
<3
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This makes me smile and feel the blessings of life. Love, Tom B.
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you know it...
i really like this style written.
Delicacy of a ballerina,
Knowledge of a philosopher
Instinct of an artist
best image of you gardening. lol.
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