I wish I could go back to my childhood days,
When I didn’t have homework and loved to play;
Those days, I didn’t have a care
Of what happened around me, what was fair or unfair.
I wish I could be a little girl again,
I would play on the playground, eat sweets, and then
I would make my mommy breakfast in bed
(Because I wouldn’t have anything to do instead).
I wish I could go back to no worries or fears,
When I didn’t have to wash behind my ears,
To my rubber duckies, my lovely dreams;
I wish I could go back to crayons and ice cream.
~ ♥
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awww :3 It's so cute, isn't it?? lol hope you like it!
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- Ages 13 and Under Only ~ Three Options to choose from by Amunet Wolfbane.
525 points, ended August 18, 2007, 13 entries
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OMG
sorry the computer didn't let me finish! SO i'm kathryn's little sister! I love the poem! I wish I could be as good as you.
I loved the ryming! I do understand it because i'm a kid homework washing behind my ears. my favorite part was:
I wish I could go back to no worries no fears.
I LOVE THE POEM!
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thank you lindsay!! :3
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OMG!
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OMG LOVE THIS POEM!!!
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Yes, it is very cute and I do like it alot. You did a great job here
Your flow and rhyme were spot on!
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Very Cute
Very nice poem. I loved it. I loved the last stanza:
"I wish I could go back to no worries or fears,
When I didn't have to wash behind my ears,
To my rubber duckies, my lovely dreams;
I wish I could co back to crayons and ice cream."
Keep writing. I love you work.
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yip.... u gotta hold onto those days! i wish i could go back to crayons and ice cream also!
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Awe this is so sweet and yes those were the days even though we might not have thought so now we can look back and say yes those were the days a very heart felt write great emotions...best of luck in the contest
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good job
Yes don't we all wish we could go back and relive our favorite memories? There's lots of years I wish I could relive that were so great. Though we can't, it's important to try and make the best of where we are now, all through our lives. True some days are better than others, but good times are always possible. We just need to make them good. Well written. Thanks for sharing.
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Sweet and Cute
Don't we all wish we could go back to the age of innocence where our biggest fearest was the dark or monsters in the closet orunder the bed. Nice word choice for your rhyming. The last stanza is my favorite and so is the last line; it ties up the poem.
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