Silent whispers speak in illusions vapors
filling last moments together within this night.
Coupled hearts engulf flames passion
wrapped with pleasured aromas.
Tender lips touch gently to intertwine
as our love beats with solid force.
Gazing deeply into realities pain
we place our agony into devotion.
Our adoration turns romantic petals
hot with driven affections appetite.
As we devour one another’s soul
satisfying cravings that only we could fulfill.
Ending with tears that burn with weakness
as our time has come to say good bye...forever!
A contest entry
- " If We Had But Just One Night". by Poetryintheblood.
375 points, ended August 16, 2007, 7 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Give me your 100th poem by Loveandblessings2u.
975 points, ended March 16, 2008, 33 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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This is so beautifully sad,
I can almost feel your every word.
It's romantic, and lightly sensual.
Your opening lines pulled me right in
and your ending was amazing.
I enjoyed very much.
Good luck in my contest.
Loveandblessings2u & yours always
;f Joyce
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This is a wonderfully written poem... I really liked the way you used such beautiful imagery to take the reader on a journey of delight through your words
congratulations on the bronze, it was well deserved, I certainly enjoyed this poem
Keep writing
Polly
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This was interesting. You showed but didn't tell. Its very clever with its metaphors and wording. I really liked this one. well done xx
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You use of language and nuance is stellar here poet! Excellent cadence and flow. Very sensual work. I love poetry that alludes to sexuality and is not explicit but makes the reader squirm in their seat. Exquisite and beautifully written.
The best to you in the contest.
Much Love ♥
Renee
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this was awsomely beautiful and sensual
it was descriptive and vivid
and i could just image it all well done
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Thank you for your beautifully sensual entry, Josephine
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wow, this is beautiful, romantic and it has great imagery.
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this is a perfect entry for this contest...a fluent flow and a fantastic ending...great piece Cheryl Ann
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with a dying breath feeding on the sustanence of a swallowed soul,
shant we never live another day alone for two souls can make us whole.
FOREVER multiplied by an infinite number, whats given comes back returning the favor,
FOUREVER divided by an eternal devotion, what returns goes back for flavor.
ATE UP!
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