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I'm Really Saying "I Love You"

When I put away my toys,
Clean my room, be nice to boys,
Do the dishes, laundry, too,
I’m really saying “I love you.”

When I share my M&M’s,
Throw a party for my friends,
Cheer up somebody who’s blue,
I’m really saying “I love you.”

When I give a band-aid to
Someone who has a bad boo-boo,
When I tell the honest truth,
I’m really saying “I love you.”

I love you when I’m being nice,
Saying "hello" (once or twice)
So let me hear you say it too:
Shout it loud: “I LOVE YOU!”

Author notes

♥ lovelovelovelovelovelovelovelovelovelove ♥
♥ heartheartheartheartheartheartheartheart ♥
♥ kisskisskisskisskisskisskisskisskisskisskisskiss ♥
♥ hughughughughughughughughughughughug ♥
♥ kisskisskisskisskisskisskisskisskisskisskisskiss ♥
♥ heartheartheartheartheartheartheartheart ♥
♥ lovelovelovelovelovelovelovelovelovelove ♥

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  • tiarna
    September 14, 2007
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    this is a great write, its so true....and beautiful great write


  • i love teddybears
    August 16, 2007

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    hehehe you deserved the bronze trophy!!!
    i really really enjoyed this poem
    especially this part
    be nice to boys hehehe


  • raggyann
    August 12, 2007
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    to very sweet
    actions speak louder then words
    sweet

  • Sky Prince Ireland gold member
    August 12, 2007

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    terrific

    Nothing short of loving and beautiful. I adore this poem. You may want to choose a darker color for the text though. The pink sort of blends in with the white making it a little hard to read. Other than that you did a great job. Thanks for entering. Good luck.
    Brian