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Fred Weasly

Hair as red as vibrant fire,
Freckles splattered across his face,
One of two, he is a twin,
In my heart, he is first place.
he is one of the Weasley boys,
Weasley Wizard Wheezes was full of his humorous craft,
Missed Forever by everyone,
He will always have the last laugh.

To Fred.

Author notes

I chose option #1. because I actually cried when he died.
my other two entries are "Hedwig the Owl" and "tonks and Lupin" the one that begins, "She is a Metamorph."

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  • photay.poetry
    August 18, 2007
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    niiiice!


  • NooNiThEWitcH
    August 13, 2007

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    This is very beautiful!
    Simply, honest and true!
    I could not believe myself when he died!

    Thank you so much for entering this in my contest.
    Hope you enter again. Keep on writing and good luck!

    Nooni


  • ur worse nightmare
    August 13, 2007

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    Brilliant I cried when he died too i also cried when tonks and rubin died too that was so sad but i love the end brilliant poem loved it


  • ronfan6
    August 12, 2007
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    omg i like loved fred.
    he was my favorite.
    very good ode to him dear!!


  • Faeryn
    August 12, 2007

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    Your making me cry! an absoloute wonderful ode to fred. you honor him with your words. can you do one for Tonks and Lupin and Mad-eye too please?

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