Scenery, grand and wide.
Wind, softly blowing, in rolls the tide.
A ride.
Awesome,
Sick, with mad style.
Around the bend.
Turn the steering wheel,
Warm from the heat of palms.
Shades down low,
Eyes over rims.
Smile,
Slight.
Tires.
Gliding smoothly.
The pavement groans slightly.
Headlights.
Smile fades.
Snap of wrist.
Collision.
Screech of steel against steel.
Sparks fly.
A single utter of surprise.
Hood crushed, smashed,
Front in rear, rear…over there.
With that,
A pretty girl,
Just dies.
The spark of death,
Intertwined.
With a spark of enlightenment.
Another world,
What’s her end?
Author notes
Um, me and my friend and her mother were driving back from the theatre, and the thought just struck me while we were on the highway...
Please tell me what you think
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Dis Ish Pretty Good Beaner!
great workkkk!
KEEP IT UPPPP!
Crimson -
SAbrina, you really need to work on you're self esteem.
this is really good. i like it alot, its sad and beautiful....Poetic.
keep it up, and stop putting yourself down!
you should try try to get your stuff published.
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i liked it very good job!! -
What are you talking about "most people think you suck"?? This is awesome! And such an imagination for it not being real! I'm impressed. And I love how you write your stuff, too. Like one word to a line...I don't remember what that form is called but this is great. And that last stanza kicks butt!
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