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My Secret Friends

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There's a fairy in my flowerbed,
Next to my sweet pea,
She looks so sweet and delicate,
Do you think she's scared of me?

There's a goblin in my garden,
Right behind the shed,
With a crooked nose and pointy shoes,
And a hat upon his head,

Pixies in the greenhouse,
Elves inside the tree,
They keep my flowers beautiful,
And they do it all for free,

There's magic in my garden,
Fairy dust in the air,
I smile and whisper 'Thank you',
For their enchanted fayre,

Next time I see a fairy,
Or an elf beside the tree,
I'll smile and leave a gift or two,
For the help they've given me.

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  • islekine
    September 2, 2007

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    This is way cool!!

    I love to grow things...all kinds....
    I have a contest going on....it is para normal...etc.
    I was hoping for more entries like this...have to change description I think...in the meantime contest is still open! Hint Hint...
    *PEACE*


  • Yummy Cinnamon Bun
    August 15, 2007

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    This is so sweet and innocently grown-up in a way...i can't really explain what i'm trying to say, but hopefully you understand...it's so good to see that there are still some adults that haven't lost touch with the imagination of childhood. thank you.

    erynn


  • deadpixie020
    August 14, 2007

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    magical.

    This is like candy for the eyes =]. I love anything to do with fairies, and I think this is just beautiful and innocent -- the way it should be. Perfect. =]


  • libithina
    August 14, 2007
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    An enchanted fairy gift

    Your poem is full of enchantment and a magiclal gift for the soul. Love and fairy sparkles x x


  • DevinCora
    August 12, 2007

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    awww... so magical!!!!!! I love it so much!!!! It made me feel all fluttery!!!! I do believe I have pixies in my green house...but I am not sure..... I just know tat i went like a week not watering them...and they are still all prettyful!!!!! But very mystcal write you have here!!!!! I very mcuh enjoyed it!!!!! Keep up the awesome work!!!


    ~DevinCora


  • Melodies silver member
    August 12, 2007

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    So beautifully enchanting!

    All the wee folks are dancing with delight from your happy descriptions of them! An adorable poem, truly!

  • Miss Malliciouse
    August 12, 2007
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    oh thats so nice...loved it.was fantastic...like a fairy tale.

    • mystic-angel gold member
      August 12, 2007
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      Thank you for your lovely comment, that was exactly how I intended it to be.
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